Date of publication: 2017-08-29 05:33
Yes, just make sure to find something unusual or unique to say about it, and not just a general essay on why you like it. Find something specific that happened, and go from there. JR
The question caught me off guard, much like the question posed to me in Laredo. Then, I realized I knew the answer. I knew why the coat hanger had been handed to me.
After a long school day, I frequently come home and rush straight to my piano, where I close my eyes and play out my emotions. But though I have been playing traditional piano for ten years, you will be hard-pressed to find me churning out a vigorous Chopin etude for fun instead, my greatest joy co.
The seat I was forced to take that first day has ever since been my greatest blessing. From all four corners I am constantly saturated by brilliance. Angular people lopsidedly focused on a particular subject, speaking with fluency in that one subject. Vulcan at his forge. A distinctive pride arises when I realize I can call these my peers. A distinctive pride with an attached humility. Feeling small is a boon when I see all the room I have to grow.
The first sentence includes items that really apply to everyone, which can make it a little confusing to applicants. We all have a background, an identity, interests, and some level of talent in certain areas. Therefore, the second half of this sentence is the most significant part of the prompt: ‘so meaningful’ and ‘incomplete without it’ are the key phrases here. Choose this prompt if you have some aspect of yourself about which you are very passionate and is essential to helping the admissions officers understand who you are.
Moments such as those challenge my criteria of what constitutes true success. My mother, despite never going to college, still managed to make a difference in my life. Tomorrow,she will put on her uniform with just as much dignity as a businesswoman would her power suit. What is her secret? She wholeheartedly believes that her son’s future is worth the investment. The outcome of my education will be vindication of that belief.
I was inconsolably angry with myself. I spent the entire car ride home tuning out my parents words of consolation, replaying my strike-out over and over in my head. For the next few days I was miserable thinking about how, if it hadn t been for me, the Bengals might have been on their way to a league victory, and nothing anyone said could convince me that the loss wasn t on my shoulders.
Hi Annie, Yes, this would make an incredible essay, and I can 8767 t imagine how that experience would not shape and define who you are in some large way. I would suggest starting with a 8775 time 8776 you were there, with no electricity and the fear of an attack, etc., and how it made you feel, and then go from there about how you dealt with that and how you think about it all. Good luck! JR
Note that writing an application essay is a compelling process that calls for concentration. The idea is to express your creativity that can be blocked by an inappropriate proofreading and checking. Do not let your inspiration fly away and write the paper first.
Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
I didn 8767 t quite get you. 8775 That can 8767 t help have been defining for you 8776 Sorry English is not my first language so I am not really good at it?
By an 8775 intense issue, 8776 I mean anything from a parent who was abusive, or alcoholic, or not on the scene for whatever reason, to having a personal issue of your own (you 8767 re deaf, or wheelchair bound, or bi-polar, or the oldest of 65 kids, or you 8767 re battling a debilitating illness ).
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